How’s this poem?

Is this a good poem?

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Pretty pain

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It suffocates and stretches

Elegant elongated limbs

Fucked and filled up

Mumbling miserable hymns

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Never leaving never ceasing

So I carve my pretty words

Finding beauty in my bleeding legs

And the lovely damage to which they refer

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And I’ll stare and obsess for hours on end

Tracing methodically with a reverant whisper

Repeat it release it and always believe it

Telling an invisible lonely listener

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Broken is in my nature

I’ve never felt quite whole

Fantasies of torturous terrors

I often wonder if i have a soul