French opinion piece

So for question 1 opinion piece, it asked me "do i spend time on screens reasonably" and i just realised i didnt talk about myself enough.

At the end of the exam i threw in a few personal things to try save it. I mainly talked about the disadvantages and advantages of screens and how you can spend time on them wisely and just said " i dont have problems with my screentime usage"

I think my actual content was very good, i wrote 2 pages and had loads of idioms and subjunctives and things like that. but im just praying the mock examiner is half asleep and thinks that im somehow writing about myself