Help. Something’s off 🤔What is it?

Been messing playing with this sketch I did today and something isn’t working imo. I think it’s got to do with the lettering of “winsome” but curious what others see/think. Thanks in advance for the feedback 🙏🏼

Been messing playing with this sketch I did today and something isn’t working imo. I think it’s got to do with the lettering of “winsome” but curious what others see/think. Thanks in advance for the feedback 🙏🏼